Question
Hey guys,please rate my poem?
How great the feeling to be free,free,free
Answer
You are lucky to be blessed with a very deep understanding of human feelings. This makes me think of the disintegration of a person struggling with addiction, in the stage where they feel tormented by their need but dont really have the incentive or want to escape it. This is officially one of the best poems I have ever read on here.brbrWhat this needs is some kick formatting, something like you see in literary magazines or published poetry books. I suggest you read through some of them and look at all the eccentric ways of formatting your poem to make it pack that extra punch.brbrAll in all, I adore this poem. Very deep and insightful. A breath of fresh air compared to all the bad poetry I commonly see.brbrbrunetttie
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